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 #### About
 
 The Capital Region Bitcoin Network was started by <a href="https://twitter.com/bitcoinkendal" 
-target="_BLANK" >Kendal Pappas</a> as a result of there not being many crypto groups and 
-wanting to create a local community around Bitcoin.
+target="_BLANK" >Kendal Pappas</a> as a result of the lack of crypto communities in New York 
+and wanting to create a local community around Bitcoin.
 
 The first meetup was held on Thursday, May 11th 2023. Meetups allow for open discussion 
-about Bitcoin news and common questions surrounding crypto.
+about Bitcoin news and common questions surrounding the currency.
 
 View the schedule of <a href="/#events">upcoming events</a> and see if you can make it to the next one.
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